poem:Home,sweet home

笑仙人

Home, Sweet Home 甜蜜的家庭<br><br><br>(1)<br><br><br>&#39;Mid pleasures and palaces though we may roam, 虽然我们也会沉迷于欢乐与奢靡中，<br><br><br>Be it ever so humble, there&#39;s no place like home&#33; 无论家是多么简陋，没有地方比得上它！<br><br><br>A charm from the skies seems to hallow us there, 好似从空而降的魔力，使我们在家觉得圣洁<br><br><br>Which seek through the world, is ne&#39;er met with elsewhere, 就是找遍全世界，也找不到像这样的地方，<br><br><br>Home&#33; Home&#33; Sweet, sweet Home&#33; 家啊！家啊！甜蜜的家啊！<br><br><br>There&#39;s no place like Home&#33; There&#39;s no place like Home&#33; 没有地方比得上家！没有地方比得上家！<br><br><br>(2)<br><br><br>I gaze on the moon as I tread the drear wild, 每当我漫步荒野凝视明月，<br><br><br>And feel that my mother now thinks of her child, 便想起母亲正惦念着她的孩子，<br><br><br>As she looks on that moon from our own cottage door, 当她从茅舍门口遥望明月时，<br><br><br>Through the woodbine, whose fragrance shall cheer me no more. 穿过冬忍树丛，浓郁树香再也不能安慰我的心灵。<br><br><br>Home&#33; Home&#33; Sweet, sweet Home&#33;家啊！家啊！甜蜜的家啊！<br><br><br>There&#39;s no place like Home&#33; There&#39;s no place like Home&#33;没有地方比得上家！没有地方比得上家！<br><br><br>(3)<br><br><br>An exile from home, splendor dazzles in vain; 对一个离乡背井的游子，再华丽的光辉，也是徒然闪烁；<br><br><br>Oh, give me my lowly thatch&#39;d cottage again&#33; 一栋矮檐茅舍！<br><br><br>The birds singing gaily, that came at my call--- 一呼即来的鸟儿正在欢唱<br><br><br>Give me them, -- and the peace of mind, dearer than all&#33; 赐给它们－还有心灵的平静，这些胜过一切！<br><br><br>Home&#33; Home&#33; Sweet, sweet Home&#33;家啊！家啊！甜蜜的家啊！<br><br><br>There&#39;s no place like Home&#33; There&#39;s no place like Home&#33;没有地方比得上家！没有地方比得上家！<br><br><br>by John H. Payne, 1791-1852 <br><br>

davy129

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quantum

诗是好诗，不过第二，三两段的中文翻译实在是太差了。<br><br>

quantum

第二段的错译：<br><br>“每当 .... 便 ....”原作者根本没这个意思。<br><br>最大的错误是将 “ whose fragrance shall cheer me no more.”翻译成：“浓郁树香再也不能安慰我的心灵。”真是跟原作者对着干啊！<br><br>原文的意思是：作者思念家乡，“(世上)再也没有比家乡树丛的芳香更让我兴奋的东西啊！”，被译者译成“浓郁树香再也不能安慰我的心灵。”偶真是佩服译者的想象力。<br><br>有些诗啊，真是不能读中文翻译：要么不知所云，要么跟原意南辕北辙。   

quantum

第三段的：“Give me them, -- and the peace of mind, dearer than all&#33; ”<br>翻译成：“赐给它们－还有心灵的平静，这些胜过一切！”不但错误，而且让人不知所云。<br>另外整个第三段的翻译，主谓宾都没搞对啊。

笑仙人

thank you for correcting me.<br>i am so sorry,i transfer it from another Forum,i forget to check it out.<br>i will be more careful next time&#33;<br>thanks again&#33;<br>

quantum

我在想，如果那句话的 shall去掉，变成 “... whose fragrance cheers me no more.”表达的意思就完全不一样了。<br><br>只是想想而已。

joy

anyway,its so sweet&#33;